Is my niche as clear as I think it is?

I just watched the Formula for Value Creation video and did the worksheet. I niched down from “I’m a money manifestation coach” to “I’m a money manifestation coach for women feeling unfulfilled and unhappy in their 9-5 who want to manifest money so they have a safety net to leave their 9-5 with peace.”

I’m going to put myself out there to offer this, learn from my fails, and receive No’s so I can get Yes’s! Woop woop.

Just wondering if the niche seems as clear as I think it is, or if it’s still broad and you have some pointers for me to be even more specific.

Thank you so much!