Hi there, here is my current unintentional model

C : My startup has 15 employees (we are not a coaching business), and we have raised millions in the past to build the product and market it. After 9 years, we are not profitable. This year we will earn 1M and spend 2. We have cash for approx 15 months left.
T : We might be out of cash and unable to raise more money if we don’t do sufficient progress in the business
F : Fear, Anxiety
A : Making strategic decisions to pivot and accelerate the business
R : Still to be proven – Q4 will be key for us

I would like to have the same A line but with a different quality of emotion underlying it as I’m fearing the R line will be enough?

Intentional Model

C : same
T : We have always raised money, we are tackling the right KPIs, we’re doing everything we can … (
F : Cautious confidence, alert confidence
A : Making strategic decisions to pivot and accelerate the business with more creative juice
R : … ?

What do you see here, can it be improved? How can I switch from unintentional to intentional ? THANKS A LOT