First way:
I help Michigan Women in overwhelming caregiver roles to reclaim their life that is guilt free, time efficient and sustainable.

Second way:
I help Michigan caregivers who are overwhelmed and lost in their roles reclaims their lives in a way that is guilt free, time efficient and sustainable.

I’m offering self care to people who are trying to feel like their old selves again. And I want to work with those who are caregivers to their elderly parents and taking care of kids. This first one seems specific enough but I also would like to work with men, too. I understand that men may still sign up even if I market to women, but I’m thinking of creating a private Facebook group and I don’t want to exclude men. If that makes sense.

Looking for insight to clean this up.