Feedback on niche after completing worksheet

I’ve used your Narrow Your Niche worksheet and have come up with this: I want to coach millennial women (20s-30s) living and working in NYC in creative fields who want to clearly define their career goals and develop a long-term plan of action using cognitive behavioral therapy and group coaching, while in the process developing a strong network of successful women who network with each other. Any feedback on whether this is narrow enough or anything I can clean up? Additionally, I want to teach online through webinars, group sessions, workbooks and host monthly meetup groups in NYC for members. Thanks!