Pitch


I am starting a life coaching business and am working on a pitch that resonates with what I have to offer. Here are two options – are they they clear and specific enough?
– I work with people who feel stuck and without choices. I help them find their power and creativity, so they feel in control of their lives.
– I work with people who feel stuck and without choices. I help them find their power and creativity, so they only need themselves for their inner well-being and happiness.