Question about offer

I’ve been coaching about a year now and I want to hone in my offer. I’ve been playing around with making it unique and compelling and want to get some feedback.

I help midlife women (40s and 50s) – they are mothers of teenagers, married, live in the suburbs, well educated, leaders in their communities.

My offer: I help you get out of pain, without blowing up your life unless of course you want to.

My question….is this specific enough? My people are in a lot of pain with midlife. Marriage, empty nest, career disappointment, loss of parents, changes in their body/sexuality/health….. My thought is, when I get them on a consult I can help them identify where their pain is and the solution I offer. I would love any thoughts feedback to consider. Thanks