Work on the offer

Hi, I l loved listening to the last episode on doubling your business in 3 months and reworked my offer. Would love to have some feedback. Many thanks in advance.

Target: You are an expat between 30- and 40-years old living in a country where your partner has accepted a position and you have children. Professionally, you want to do what you love and become financially prosperous. You want this success to fit with your family goals.

Offer: I can help you become a thriving expat partner professional who exceeds all his or her career dreams. I can help you become the successful professional you aspire to be. I help become a confident, proud, financially striving professional through helping you turn all the challenges that you may face into opportunities and not by counseling you on your career track. This work will change your life and I cannot wait to start working with you.