Intentional Model Review

Hello! I just had a great 20 min coaching call! I came up with a model afterwards and I wanted to get some feedback. For my thought, I am using it more as a statement than a question, but maybe there’s a better way to phrase it so it doesn’t sound like a question?

C- Looking for jobs in Northwoods WI
T-Maybe no 26 year old is making $50,000 here, but what if I could be the first one.
A- Try different methods, be open to the possibility, look for jobs
R- Move towards making $50,000 in the Northwoods

Thanks!! PS. Happy Valentine’s Day!