Making a story great (BL)


I’ve been doing well making a story from yesterday great even if it didnt feel good at the time. I’m stuck on this one, though:
The part of yesterday that wasn’t great was the 5-6:00pm hour. I was cooking dinner, my husband brought our two year old home from daycare and everyone was cranky. My son wanted my husband’s attention; my husband was trying to get ready for a work meeting and eat an early dinner; I was feeling stressed. How can I turn this story around? Thank you!