Model Check

Would you please check this model. I think I’m missing something. I was hooked into the UIM for several weeks and in the new model I simply felt unhooked, realeased.
C. Hair cut
T. I hate my hair cut
F. Hate (disgusted hate😉)
A. Fuss with hair, dislike myself, distracted by T & F, feel less than when with others, project my T into their minds,
R. I hate myself, create much unnecessary suffering

C. Hair cut
T. I don’t like my hair cut and that’s ok
F. Acceptance
A. Laugh 😂 No longer distracted and live my life
R. I’m ok, I’m free, unhooked from the suffering, love and accept myself

Any thoughts welcome
Thank you