model feedback – thought causing feeling of intimidation

C Another coach sent an email offer this morning
T wow she hasn’t been doing this that long and has a ton of great content and offerings.
F intimidated
A hide, think about how I might not be able to do this, not produce
R slow growth of my business and coaching skills

C another coach sent an email offer this morning
T If she can do what she’s done this quickly, I can’t wait to see how I grow my business. I’m going to double down on my personal growth and building my business.
F committed
A follow schedule, work through uncomfortable emotions, manage thoughts, create content
R better personal and business growth

Anywhere I should clean this up?