Confusion l Should I get more specific ?

I found myself not really showing up and committing to my myself lately so I want to pick a sentence that brings this idea of now it’s over, I will do the work and “fight” for my goals.

I’m working on an intentional model.

The T line is : My highest desire now is to achieve remarkable results and/or I want to live the best life I could possibly have dreamed about.

But I question that, is it not specific enough ? Too vague ? Can we really build motivation on something like that ?