Hard Why

Hi, I’m wondering if you would give me feedback on my hard why. Three questions, are hard whys only for business creators? I don’t currently have a business, but am using this work for my own journey of self-discovery. Second question, can I use more than one emotion, or should I hone in on one?
Third, do you recommend it being more succinct?
Here’s what I would like feedback on…

I want to continually peel away the ineffective layers of my mind to uncover its pure core, and from that space of true identity, begin to build, create and foster a more authentic existence, even one that is currently incomprehensible.
The emotions this triggers are Courage and Openness.
Thanks for any guidance you have!