Could I get feedback on my model, please?

Unintentional:

c: Cheeks sagging
t: I’m getting old
f: Hopeless
a: Paralyzed
r: Not much

Intentional, starting with the T line:

C: Cheeks sagging
T: I’m getting old, so what.
F: Invincible
A: Getting coaching, working on my business
R: Engagement from my audience

Intentional starting with the F-line:

C: cheeks sagging
T: This is the first sign of a complete re-invention.
F: Excited
A: Working on my re-invention. Getting coaching. Working on my business. Doing everything different than before.
R: Surprise!