Model for K


Hi Brooke,
I am working on changing this model:
C: raising three children in a foreign country
T: I need balance
F: ache in my breast
A: work more, try new things
R: no rest
into:
C: raising three children in a foreign country
T: I am finding balance step by step
F: confident, open breathing
A: plan personal time
R: feel balanced
But the new thought sounds dissonant to me. Any idea ?
Thanks!
Karine